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Hi Reader, Well, I'm back from my holiday! It was truly wonderful; great weather, lots of swimming, an excellent buffet, and fun trips to the zoo and aquarium. Kyan did extremely well on the plane (which was a surprise, since he's always a bit apprehensive with new things). He also loved the mini disco and the bathtub we had in our room. I do still prefer camping, though. Hotels are nice for a bit, but camping is more... relaxing. For me, at least. I'm also a bit scattered today and find it...